Calling Birds

Posted Apr 13, 08:48 AM in Poetry by Scott Conley

I recently finished my first attempt at a children’s-style poem, and I like it enough to post here for thoughts.

For best results, read it out loud to someone nearby!



Calling Birds

Once I saw three calling birds
Espy a puddle by the sea,
Where there, just near the water fair
They might bathe in privacy.

Plish! Went one, chest first, into
The sandy muddle by the sea-
Singing loudly as it splashed
Into its joyous revelry.

Plosh! Boldly went the second with
No care for subtlety!
A cheered elation, a celebration
Within its spirit free.

But how the third deferred its entrance
To the huddle of the three!
It seemed to flit an extra bit
On its own pert melody.

  I thought: Cheeky, chirpy calling bird!
  Your rapture captures me.
  Now darting, dancing, aerial prancing?
  For all who care to see?

  What cause have you to sing so?
  How maps this rhapsody?
  What could so absurd a bird
  As to demonstrate such glee?

Pla-plash! Dancing done, it joined the fun
With the grandest entrance yet to be!

  And while they hopped and flapped and sang
  And water all about was flang
  I realized with aching pang

They knew more of life than me.

That wet, contented trio
In a puddle by the sea.


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Maddie
Monday, April 13 2009

I love this poem because it reminds me of three people that I know. Even down to the behaviors and personalities.


Shel S
Monday, April 13 2009

Love the rhythm, but don’t think flang is a word.


thrrixn
Monday, April 13 2009

not bad not bad ill fwd to my mom who will luv it


scranky
Tuesday, April 14 2009

‘flang’ is clearly an artificial construct used by the author to carry his piteous rhyme scheme. Sad, really.


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